Thursday, August 18, 2011
Poem - sometimes you just want to jump out of the car ?
I like the poem in the fact that it uses exuberance and several tones to describe what you were trying to express, e.g. "his tussled yellow hair glowing under the Sun" and "sitting in the gr under the median". You carefully use entities which are "stored" mentally in the reader's mind of what colour it is, for example, the majority will view Heaven as a location with pearly white gates rather than a bleak, barren, dark residence. I especially like the first stanza, where it gives me the sense of peace, serenity and tranquility, with "silent" attached to heat, and the rivers gently doing what is in Mother Nature's favour, moving slowly. It is smartly a contradiction to the lines length seeing that the stanza is rather quick, but what it contains is rather slow.
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